Catchay
Purposely misspelled. I like the opening, Gimme 16 Bars.
I have no opinion on your usage of the word, but i am glad that you had the thought to use n***a instead.
Its catchy. great music words. I rarely appreciate a song with vocals so much. Is that your own voice? Great lyrics.
All in all, great work. none the less, it should have been longer. though with rap lyrics i know it might be hard to write them all and nevermind record it without screwing up.
Great job. Keepz it up! 5/5 vote.
I'll try to keep it up! Up up up...
O__o
pretty much the shit... good job. XD
Thanks!
Whoa..
Thought I was listening to T.I. for a second there, nice man. You got some skillz.
Who's T.I,?
I hope that's a good thing. lol
Whoahh!!
Dude!! Make it longer and it'd be the bomb!! Awesome song man!
Kablooie!
Really good!
I must say that short piece was great!
I mean, if you made this longer, more verses, a chorus type thingy it would be fantastic!
Keep up the good work!
I'll try! Thanks for the review.