This better win the robot contest.
I hate when people are too busy to realize all the beauty around
Reviews for "The Simple"
incredible
this is awesoe, i love it
Excellent
Wow, pretty solid. This should be a pretty nice contender for robot day.
I like the consistency of the color. You have kept up the sepia tone very nicely.
Your lighting is very good. Normally I would make mention for you to make much stronger and clearer highlights, but then that would have been inconsistent with the style if the piece. You have done well with giving metallic looks to certain areas, which is very nice on its own.
Over all I like this piece, and its mostly pretty well done, except for one part, and that is the duplicating of the robot. Sadly its kind of obvious that you have the same bot copied and pasted for quite a while. I don't blame you, it would have been a lot of work to paint a different robot each time. I would have been looking for a short cut as well. What you should have done, and can still do very quickly and easily (especially if this is done in layers) is use some gradient overlay to dull out some of the color of the robots in the back. You can also take a few minuets and try and add a couple of marks on different robots to try and separate them. I understand that they are fresh out of the factory, which I can see in the background, but you gotta separate them a little, or you will get this repetitive look that will stand out really bad.
Very nice. Good luck on Robot Day!
xTY3x responds:
thank you for reviewing this work. about the copy and paste stuff... i knew from the beginning i would have done it. the one thing i tried to do was to copy a basic stage of the robot and then refining lighting and shading individually, to avoid that bad effect, but i suppose i didn't manage to reach my objective. anyway, thanks for taking your time, we'll see on robot day.
Good
The one looking "away" could stand out a bit more, or at least, that is what my artteacher would say:) other then that , I like it!
xTY3x responds:
i didn't want it to be celebrative and rethorical, i wanted it to be as simple as possible.
Thoughtful
It's a very nice piece and, as you can see from the person who made that poem below, actually somewhat inspiring. Very well done.