Reviews for "Track One_RR"


The 1 minute mark made my pants explode in all sorts of gasms!

1:58 is an awesome sound, very filling. I like big sounds (and wish I could do them myself).


I want to see more use of the melody that's right at the start. I like that dark sound a lot.

RenoakRhythm responds:

lol, gasms... i love that statement.... i seriously listen to this in the car and get pumped at that point every time. And my ears gasm with the speakers uber loud.

I WILL UPLOAD MOAR. I'm reformatting my music computer as I have crappy virus. Then I go on trip for the weekend. So next week I'll upload MOAR. Kinda very bumbed about my computer, I got it while on facebook. Facebook of all places!

Anyways, you'll like the full version (not mastered yet, or I would have put it up today)....



Track One_RR

Just going to tell you that this song was sick. You may be new to Newgrounds, but I can tell that you are not new to music.

Well, I have to say that the intro did throw me off, really sounded like the ridiculous side of bored musicians. However, at 30 seconds, when there were more drums coming in, I could just tell that I was not about to listen to a piece of crap that would make me run to a local pharmacy and buy earplugs. At 1:00 you prove me right, this is a song worth listening to.

The melody work is great, and the prominent bass works very well, which actually surprised me. Normally I hate prominent bass, but you couldn't notice it here unless youre actually carefully listening to the song to critique it. That's what's amazing, the way it just flows as a whole song and not just separate melodies glued together.

Well, since this is a demo, I can't actually grade it properly. There was no climax, and the intro was just too long and un-setting. 1 minute is overkill, especially with that about of diversity from the main part of the song.

Overall, great! 5/5.

RenoakRhythm responds:

WOW, thanks so much for the lengthy review.

You're right, no climax, not much variation, and if this was the only part of the song, it would be boring. Infact, if i never had brung the beginning them back in at all (in the full version) it would seem ridiculous.

I really appreciat the great words of advice and also noticing the really cool parts of the song that others haven't said anything about.


This is your first song here?

Whoa, I'm really impressed. I was listening to this thinking that I was hearing an NG veteran. The first minute sounds aight as is, but when the whole song comes in around the 1 minute mark the beat is awesome. My only real complaint is that I don't really like the kick sample you use in the very beginning.

You're off to a good start.

RenoakRhythm responds:

Thanks for the review. I will consider changing the kick in the beginning, unfortunately I have to reformat the computer i use to make music and might be out for a while... so i'm majorly depressed.


Not Bad

Still lots and lots of fx u can put in, but Really not bad for a first song dude:D
Tnx For Ur REview:D

RenoakRhythm responds:

Thanks for the review.


Great Job!

Good job, it's sound good to my ears. I want to hear more song of you!

If you have the time, can you review my song Mr.Travelling Man Remix

It would be very apreciate

8/10 and a 5/5

RenoakRhythm responds:

Thanks for the review. I will be uploading more as time comes. The next thing I upload will be the completed version of this song.

Ya, i'll come review your song.