I love how you started out this song! The music captures your concept so well!!
If you have read any of my other reviews, i'm a pretty tough critic here on NG, but this is amazing! This is going on my favorites.
Just a couple of things though :). I think that the rain maybe could have died out somewhere around 1:24, and you could have some great wind-chimes or some vibraphone come in there, or some really nice choir and loud piano playing some high notes. But I didn't take a star off for that because, that would have not captured your concept as well as you did it. But just for some other listeners, i think they may be thinking the same thing. I absolutely love this song, it si definatly one of my absolute favorites. The ending was awesome, although i think that the guitar, at the end, stopped too abruptly. I think you should have maybe strung out that chord for maybe another couple of seconds, let the strings ring out. I don't know what the people below me mean when they say they can't see any use for this. Thats not true, you could defiantly use this in maybe some T.V. show or some animation that deals with some romance.
But overall, just amazing, absolutely amazing! You have so much talent in music composition and you shouldn't let that go to waste! Pursue this talent, and just use it to propel you through life, help you get along! In your free time maybe if you are feeling down, LISTEN TO THIS SONG!! aw man this song just totally touches my heart! you can never get enough of this song, i been listening to it for 20 min now. aw so amazing! You are on my favorite artists now, i will check in with your new songs everytime they come out.
I have never given out a 10/10 5/5 before but you have defiantly earned it
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!