Perfect!
The lighting shows suspense more then drama, and isn't that what you wanted from it? Because of the shading and lighting, I think this might be even better then LOTR works. You really surprise me sometimes. To think that this kind of work is easy for you, even when you're not feeling good... you're like an art god.
I want to see your work when you're at your best. I believe you can easily become the top artist on the portal.