Poor continuity, but a great movie
You have excellent directing skills, and with the right music you managed to cast a very complete picture on the audience, but then the music fades out, the screen goes white, and it takes like 3 seconds before anything else is happening and it ruins it. I think it happened twice at the beginning, but I suppose the only reason why I noticed was because you managed to hit that perfect note in the first place, you just couldn't hold it.
Was that movie really 8 minutes long? It didn't feel like I had been watching for 8 minutes... heh, good job!