First of all, even though this is your first time making music, it's still horrible.
Second, this is your FIRST TIME making music.
Beatboxing is not what you want to do the first time you make music.
I don't know what is, but I know that isn't.
Third, this could have been better, had the voice quality not been f*cked up.
And from the sound of it, you f*cked it up on purpose.