Great
Sounds awesome man, really hits what your keywords are.
the last note sounds fine.
you just have to listen to it a few times for the net lag to let it loop more fluently.
Thats one thing I notice with all your loops, the net always lags it the first time it loops so I gotta wait for the 2nd or 3rd in some cases 4th time in order for it to sound fluent.
Btw what program are you using for this? i walla say FLS but it doesn't sound like FLS.