You've made a good one there!
This has got the potential to make it on the club scene in places like Ibiza this summer. Get to the recording studio STAT!
I think that a few little tweaks could be made here and there, like adding a little more variation, possibly another different vocal sample, for example and then there's also the case that it doesn't have any real lyrics, so to speak - clubbers love to have something with a good beat to dance to, which you've provided. When they go out looking for it, they need some lyrics to go on and that's the marketing genuis behind this genre of music.
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