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Reviews for "River City Ransom :S.W."

One word : Spellcheck

You need to check your spelling and grammar when you are writing the intro to the story. Some of what you said came off as just plain jibberish.

work on it more...

needs some good background music...and also the animations where too choppy

the-dukester responds:

You know, I want to, but I still haven't figured this Flash make. Its called Seltco flash 4. I can put music in the back, but have to be in NPC format.

My 2 cents

The intro was kind of long and you probably lose alot of people when they see all that writing. you should probably incorporate that into your flash instead of reading it b4 hand.. maybe a prequel? Well anyways i think it would run smoother without the next buttons. I loved the blood gurgle sound when they hit the ground though... keep it up

the-dukester responds:

Yeah, I know, but dosen't mean you could skip it. But it was a good story line. Not to worry though, this is Part one. Part two wouldn't have an Intro Storyline.