Concept to Product.
I think that the concept of this piece is absolute genius and certainly provokes thought and curiosity, especially in one as myself. But the actual production of it seems childish. Too cartoony for such a serious subject. So, in the long run, I give you wonderful credit for the thought, the idea, the depth behind it.. but the visual aspect? I can't say that it captures me and holds me to your point at all.
Annoying
Good drawings up until the point where they eat the one fool. No story really, and the sound was kinda annoying, good drawings is your good crit i guess...
yeah
No such thing as cheating with flash...if you're an artist, like myself, use it to your advantage. Anyone who trashes you for using your talent is a moron. Well done movie.
good movie
i dont know about other people, but i liked a whole lot 4/5 good job with this movie
So much potential
It's a shame to have to do it. The animation, art, design, and flow was excellent, but the bells and whistles can't save it. You have a good idea, but it is too underdeveloped. To have to read something seperate to get a vague idea of what you're trying to say is very dissapointing and pretty amature. You need to recollect your thoughts and fix this up. I understand it was a time trial but as you said "art is art" and "It's a good idea when you write it down on paper." Still needs to go a bit further and this isn't anything new either. The loud noises and sudden death of the creature didn't come as a total shocker either. It really dissapoints me to have to do it and I don't have it out just to get you either. Still as I stress excellent art, that really is your strong point.