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Reviews for "Unfinished Story (original)"

Actually...

....this is very good!
It combines various types of rhythms and the result may be crazy, but it is cool!
Well since you asked for some suggestions in the author's comments l'll be happy to oblige:
1.Make the track a little less repetitive on some points
2.Add some heavy beats
3.Make the transition from one melody to another smoother
Apart from that, the track is perfect!

genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

hello again, i think its crazy and cool and experimental, something ive been leaving forgoten for a reason i dont even know lol, thats why i experimented again :D, ill work on the repetiveness since its something ive heard quite alot lately :P, as from the melodies transition im not quite sure with melodies :( and ill consider the heavy beats ;P thanks :D

its not as bad as you may think

i like it, im surprized no ones wrote reviews about this too, but everything sounds good to me in this song, its probably something i'd use during a time phase for some epic adventure or something, who knows! probably not even me. oh well. but anyways, i'll definatly check out some of your other songs, goodluck with future submissions

genee responds:

thank you Cue94, yeah youre right, it feels like and epict adventure song:P ,ill try to keep posting more songs and if u ever make a flash and want the song go ahead ( :) , and i really apreciate your comment, thanks again :)