the grass
the grass looks very thin, and the shapes of the characters are pretty basic (streched spheres), I suggest modelling something more advanced that used different textures and materials.
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pupuhugr responds:
This is pretty much the worse excuse for a 7 I've ever seen. Have you never seen thin grass? I'm looking at a whole bunch of reference of it right now. And yes, I obviously know these are basic characters, I modeled them. This was a fiber fx test and an sss test on the wings. Even the most basic of things can have a beautiful purpose havegum.