Hmm
I think there's one duff note in your backing track. It just sounds a little out of key, so a little tweak there would improve the track greatly. The problem with the track being one long loop of the backing track doesn't really help the situation, but I will say that the melody makes a good effort to disguise it.
I loved the high end piano towards the end of the tune. A nice variation on the theme and it really added another level to the track. I still think that for a 3 minute track you are lacking a little variation. Maybe something changing around the backing to liven it up a little?
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