DAWG!!!!!!
10 Stars fa you ma man 10! I ain gon lie I was thinkin I bout to listen to some lame ass song once again but you suprised me man.......This shit off da chains usually when I listen to somethin you spit no intended I get bored almost right away and cut it off but this shit goes hard man....Good fuckin job. You can sleep tight knowing I think its so.
Hey listen...
I'm really glad to made this song, I've been checking your songs out and you've always had amazing lyrics but the only problems I had was the topics for some of your songs. There were some songs that didn't send any messages...it was more like "I fucked this bitch" and it's kind of pointless, either way this song is great. If you get a studio mic I think you'll be fine, flow was good and lyrics on point.
I mean if anything, most of these "ringtone rappers" as I like to say have no love for the music, no passion for it. You look like you have that so get your messages across, and you'll do fine. Sometimes making it big isn't worth losing yourself, just remember that.
thanks a lot for the positive review
Shiiitt....
This was fly bro. I really like what was said to. The choruses were really great too. And the beat itself, ahh... pure brilliance.
I respect the message.
The lyrics to this are well put together. But as far as your delivery goes, its kinda off. Sounds like your moving back and forth from the mic, which makes some words hard to understand. And it sounds like you put too much adlibs, which doesn't fit the mood of the track. Also, that beat is fucking amazing in my honest opinion. I feel that it should get more attention, and just lower your vocals about 2dbs just to set more of a melodic mood. Either way, good job song. Keep it up.
Babies having babies...
True say there. You know how to write, which is quite impressive. Love it.