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wow ok interesting and its pretty good but if you want to draw to impresse to need to draw and different perspectives and angles,because everything is on the front view and you could of added some backgrounds like buildings or to make it easy do silhouette of the buildings maybe some trees or something and you got to use more effective ways to use your panels.well i could do this comics for you(maybe).I'll try to show you one day how you could make this better using shading and etc.I would stay here all day explaining you better your visual story telling.I feel like you could make this bigger and size(yeah its a bit 2 small and you could of made this story longer.Your doing good this are very good characters.PS:to make it easy for people to know witch line to read 1st make the 1st one bigger then the 2th one ;) your awesome man.