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Reviews for "Nav - Deathwish [Full Ver.]"

Split Personality !?

Mate, the beginning is fantastic, really gets you in a calm state of mind, but the thin little sine you bring in ruins the amazing sfx in my opinion. You should get rid of it, and use a scary piano instead, and when the beat comes in keep the fx going with the two, because when the beat comes in and the SFX fade, your track loses its fullness. You can let it fade at the break, but not this early! As the bass comes in, my point is strengthened, imagine what that bass would sound like with that SFX? It's a very nice bass, and I like the directness of the percs. The little pad in the background is very good also, keeps it driving.

Heres what you should do :

- Keep the SFX throughout with the bass, and then break with a pad and piano which is haunting.
- Maybe add one more loop to give the track a little more drive.
- Maybe you could bring the bass in after 17 bars (Yes that quick)
- GET RID of that sine at the start, it's really annoying and very unprofessional.

Otherwise, this is downloaded and well enjoyed.

Pulstate.

Nav responds:

Ok, I will take your advice. See, I was using timestretching pads here, so I didn't know what I would get. I'll be sure to take it out!

I'm see what I can do about bringing the bass in the intro. Thanks for the review! :D

Woot

Sounds great.
Sounds more darkish and threatening to begin with but gets in a nice fast DnB mood. Reeve sounds cool and angry. =)
I think this would sounds awesome in a futuristic fast-paced race game/flash. Like Wipeout.
Personally I think the slow part goes on for a bit too long... Also then it tunes out when the beat comes back, and I would've wanted to listen to the beat for a while longer...
But you said you're working on a second drop, which would make it cooler, but you're not posting it here... =(
As I don't know anything about filtering, EQ compression and the rest, I can't really complain about much.
10/10

Nav responds:

Haha, thanks for the review! If you send me a PM, or just ask, then I'll link you to the full version when its done. I just think its will be too long for NG's idea of a song.

I think that you should definitely take some time to read up on Filtering (which is really just EQing), compression, and "the rest," so that you'll know what it all does! And believe me: it helps a lot!

Thanks for reviewing! :)

nice...

I liked it, it had a lot of originality in it. You lost just one point for stretching it out too much, could have easily been 3 minutes or less.
Still a very good effort, maybe it could work in some sort of racing game.

-Pants

Nav responds:

Thanks! I too thought that it could work in 3 minutes, but then its not good for DJs to use, as there's not enough room to beatmatch! Also, people complained that the last few of my dnb tracks were too short, so I made this one longer!

Thanks for the review! :)