think about this
I sometimes wonder why people think they should substitute good grammar for being able to draw. It was painful to read and the dialougue wasn't that great. Probably would've been better without dialogue at all. Or maybe at least a caption bar at the bottom instead of the text being allover the screen. It looks sloppy.
Other than that small problem, you've got yourself an excellent animated flash.
the animation is ok but it wont get me anywhere in life. The text happened as a mistake (I've mentioned this before) ill say somthing different about the voice acting now, yes I have concidered it but there is a big line between good voice acting and bad voice acting. I myself am a terrible voice actor. but i can tell when people are not also. for exapmple the animation on Genyus blade animation. it has great animation but the voice acting was bad. overall thanks for the commment
good job
just one thing i didnt like (aside from some weak dialogue) no voice acting!! its the only thing that is lacking. as for the rest of it good job. very good job.
Really good
Your frame by frame drawing rate is excellent. I just wish that you would extend some of them. Like when that green water is coming out of the pod thingy. It was too quick, but it was very well done. You've got some potential. Just one thing that bothered me a bit. If you could please correct your speling of certain words. Because I noticed quite a few mistakes. That's all. Good job.
Ok, I d make mistakes but this wont happen as i will be writing a script on word before i put it into the animation. sure i could have voice action but this creates the problems mentioned before. my animation could be better however. thanks for the comment, expect to see some majour difference in episode 2!
good, but...
there are a couple things...i think the animation is really good, but the rain was a little too much. it was in too much concentration and kind of diverted from the focus. Also the sound on the rain was good quality, but too loud. Lastly, the text...chenge it. The different colors across the screen makes it look childish and it is hard to read...use bubbles!!! but other than that its cool
i used to use bubles. i will bring them back then. Ill miss see though text. this will be taken into acount. The rain is abit loud but I think it makes the scene more dramatice. the black background, the rain and the emotion. makes a sweet scene. wait till episode two. some brighter scenes await.
crisp
good movie , kinda reminds me of ninja gaiden, but needs improvment on backgroundal effects , and sound , dont get rid of sound sooo fast fade it out , unless u could think of something real catchy , other than that good job good work , and good luck