Funny!
I liked this one
Reviews for "Dragon_Lock Adventures"
Vaslious responds:
Thanks Pear, i'll try to remember to put you in my next one.
lame dude...
I mean come on, Strawberry clock doesn't live in a cave and neither would he have 0 guards. the locks could not win that easily. try again with something a little more beilivable
Vaslious responds:
Your funny, here's a few of my observations about you.
1) You opened an NG account less than a month ago.
2) You have like 6 Blam/Save points combined which tells me you haven't seen much flash nor do you know much about Strawberry_Lock. He is a character based on a poor flash artist that stopped coming here years before you "discovered" this place.
3) I like your idea for some guards, pointless clock death is always amusing.
4) As for believablity, you tell me the believabilty of almost anything that happens on "The Simpsons" or "South Park" and i'll start making believable flash animations (it's called imagination, use yours).
This is lame as far as flash's go at this point due to the lack of content, not the lack of believablity n00b.
Adventure unfolds!
Well, I'll comment on what I think.
The locks in the beginning requred its center "lock" piece to move about to stimulate a better transition of speech. Same could be said for StrawberryClock.
The Music needs to be compressed by all means, at least by streaming. A simple way is to make your new scene and paste all the frames of each scenes into your first scenes. Then setting the sound on "stream", should help out much. The Artwork still needs a bit of improving and the end was kinda lacking..
Good points of this film was the FPS rate. Sorry thats all I can see for now. :-) But lightsabers! Good to see that!
Just keep practicing and you'll produce a better result. Good luck.
Vaslious responds:
1)Lock motion- I agree and will correct
2)Music compression- I'll try that too, i'm still kinda iffy on using audio so i'll try getting a better output.
3)Artwork, i admit the background suck. The characters i drew and the other lock characters were fine, the back ground was lacking. The end is supposed to be a few mins but i was kicked off the comp and just sumitted what i had. I will correct these points.
4)FPS and Lightsabers- there will be and acutual battle eventually and the sound fx are on the way.
Thank you for this helpful review!
argh
just stop. its not funny anymore. please. sorry for the shitty review but hey this movie isnt great.
Vaslious responds:
lol, i'm not sure what was supposed to be funny about it. This is only my second submitted flash so it's not like this is following a theme. I agree the movie isn't great which is why i'll take the time the correct it. You might want to follow that yourself rather that post a good and a bad flash on a almost daily basis. :p
Thank you for your opinion even if it wasen't a constructive review.
That was kind of good...
You should of spent more time on this - I didn't bother watching it all the way through, since I can't stand that computerized voice; you had a good concept, you just didn't take enough time.
Vaslious responds:
True, i didn't spend enough time on it and now that it's been saved i will go back and put the effort it lacked into it. Sometimes to make a deadline you have to sacrife substance just make sure you follow through. Don't worry, i'll always go back and fix anything that was blatently bad, because I listen to reviewers comments.