i can tell you put a lot of work into it
try to add like a huge third person view of a spaceship or something in the lower left corner, peering down at what ever the heck is going on.
i it is cool and all but i feel like it can use something more artistic, drawing-wise than just doing the standard star noise effect, render clouds, mass lens flares, and dodge tool light streams. it's too cliche and overdone. try and add something of your own spaceship fleet or something in there