spend 4 MORE hours
This is a cool short track, but it sounds flat and almost like it was recorded in mono. I also do feel like this boarders more over towards Heavy Meta' than it does Industrial. Obviously you know what your doing, so I don't understand why you don't spend 4 MORE hours to obtain better mixing, clarity and even adding in some cool industrial'ish sound effects and maybe some cool dark synths.
Just to let you know, if you mention that you didn't spend a lot of time on making a song, I'm not going to give you a higher score. Theres lots of people here that spend a lot of time on there tracks, those are the people that I will "be fair" with. ;)
3/5 - 4.32 / 5.00 (- 0.024)