Well...
Disregard my point vote down below.
I try not to assign point values for first movies, it seems so unfair. I always give a 5 to newbie movies, well unless they make me wish I was dead. This was good though, much better than my first flash, none of my work has ever been on NG! so don't bother. Cool text, and a decent story reminds me of Office Space. Keep working at, soon you will either give up and join the clocks or develope better flash movies. By the way your other movie "FF Mog" was good. I love the FF series. I gave it a three, but don't fill bad my rating system is as fallows:
X-0 = F, 1 = d, 2 = c, 3 = b, 4 = a, 5 = Spectacular! Which I have only givin once.
Try and do antoher sprite flash, I think you will be very good after more practice.