* cuts self and b'awws *
i think its great art, and the trolls can go live under a bridge, renamon's ears could use work
Reviews for "That Was Fun"
"I like the scenery."
Are they just female friends? But I do like the small details (like the tattoos on there legs and glasses on her head.) The volleyball under her arm was a fantastic touch, though! And the water dripping off of them does prove that they were swimming in the ocean. But at the bottom of the blue ones leg, there are slight openings and parts of empty none-colored spaces.The sky is white, and has no color at all.I would of liked to have seen some seashells on the seashore. There is an opening on the yellow ones bathing suit (left hand side rite under the armpit) But I do like the footprints on the sand and there shadows.
Oh no
I have a premonition that this will lead to furry porn.
Nice idea, poor composition.
Your coloring is alright, but the obvious slop job on the background detracts from everything.
Your outlines on the characters don't match the general shape of the characters, nor do they even reach the bottom of the page.
You in fact didn't bother to erase the coloring on the legs of one on the left, as the white can clearly be seen poking through the calves. The blue one's coloring can be seen poking through the outline of their thigh, which is completely disproportionate to the body.
Your head sizing is well off, and causes the blue one to look very flat and muted. It is very small and misshaped.
The outlines where it crosses along the ball are not following the arm shape and the thicker ones actually go into the ball. This is a terribly sloppy effort, and all around looking quite rushed.
Hellknight1000 responds:
Wowwwww, this is like, the first REAL review I've gotten...
Much appreciated. I'll be sure to try and improve upon these points.
BEET
This
is
pretty good.
Renamons eye seems a little strange.