Where's the meat?
I love this song and the band who performed it. I have the game version, the Zebrahead (band) remix and the the Smash remix and would consider adding this one, except for the fact that you only used the same line through the whole song. It was like one big long great intro, as if I was taking my first bite into multiples of the same sandwich. Personally, I like to eat the whole sandwich, and if someone is going to spice up that sandwich and toast it, I want to be able to enjoy the whole thing. You've done a great job so far now if only you could complete the verse...