Effort (That Springs To Mind)
Before you do anything with a film, make a loader, it's the most annoying thing when a film has no loader, and at the end create a new scene with a stop action in with an again button, it's not hard. It takes all of 5 minutes (If That).
I don't mean to be personal, but please don't submit anything else before youve done that.
Ps- But You art work is alright, but just try not to use sticks