its good - if a bit crowded.. I think you should branch out a bit, try other things than the haloesque epicness - something calm and peaceful, with harps and choirs and piano and rippling water, see where your other feelings can lead you :)
overall pretty good - from all the reviews you got for this song - its obv. getting more attention than anything I ever did - highest amt. of reviews I have right now is 97 - keep on truckin' dan!
and ya I'm kinda trying to make up for all the years I didnt review your stuff - sowwy..