This tune has all the stuff that i said you last one lacked - length, variation, changes of instruments.
The 3 minute marker seems to be the key. Stick aroubnd this sort of length and you can come up with a decent tune, provided you fill it with variation. I can quite easliy see this being used for some sort of racing game now, it's got that extra tempo, to keep people with quick minds in the frame of mind for racing.
Mind you, if it's going to go for that sort of game, you'd need to add more bass, that's a must.
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