This is a great work of art
Ignore the haters, i've definitely seen worse on this site and yours doesn't even close coming to the category of "suck". Keep up the good work my man, I see potential in your work.
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DragonPunch responds:
Thank you very much.
wow
theres alot of dicks writing reviews for this.nice drawing man just ignore the assholes.
DragonPunch responds:
Thanks a lot! I think I will ignore the assholes. Then again, there ARE some helpful tips being said here.
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Doesn't make it any better.
Why do anime? Learn some human anatomy, and stop drawing in this generic easy as fuck style. You're not turning anyone on here.
You don't even have a unique style, it's the same overused bullshit untalented people go to when they can't draw.
I hate to come off like a dick, but you seem to regurgitate any criticism given to you and get angry with people. If you don't want to get better, than what the hell are you doing art for? That's the entire purpose of practice and criticism.
I would much rather have someone give me a 0 with criticism than a 10 and say "lolgood!" LEARN SOME HUMAN ANATOMY. TAKE CRITICISM LIKE AN ADULT.
critique
Hey there ^^ I draw anime too, so I thought you might appreciate a little critique from me.
To be honest, the pose doesn't make a lot of sense. You can say what you want about "weird angles" etc, but trust me, I draw weird angles all the time, and the anatomy never suffers for it. There's something off about the anatomy, you can deny it all you want, but it won't improve the anatomy of the picture. Please accept that.
I did see someone comment this was traced. Now, I have never seen the original picture this person is claiming you traced, but I am going to believe there was in fact an original picture and you have redrawn it.
I need to stress this, I'm not trying to be mean, but I HAVE to stress this;
!!!NEVER REDRAW ANOTHER PERSON'S PICTURE AND JUST CHANGE THE HAIR, CLOTHES, EYES ETC.!!!
Look, it's okay to use a reference sometimes if you get stuck, sometimes I need to reference hands and certain things too. BUT, I am only using it for little things like that. When you redraw someone's picture, it /NEVER/ looks good. It looks bad and to be honest it's very easy to tell when something is redrawn from something else, usually the standards of colouring do not match how good the drawing is. Just a heads up.
So now I'll give you an indepth description of what's wrong with the anatomy. PLEASE listen to what I am saying. It's not having an untrained eye. This is what's wrong with the picture. I can understand that you, as the person who drew it, cannot see these flaws, but they exist. The sooner you accept that, the sooner you can improve.
First off, I thought the most noticable thing was the torso. It's facing an entirely different direction to where her butt is positioned. In real life, this pose would not make sense.
That's a really important thing in drawing, you have to draw what you see, NOT what your mind percieves should be correct. So when drawing, always try to think to yourself "can I or anyone else actually correctly do this pose if tried?" It helps me when I get stuck on awkward anatomy.
The legs aren't awful, but they are awkward. Again, they're going a different angle to the butt and torso. That's kind of what makes them awkward. I've already explain that though, so no point going over it again.
The breasts are too high up to be honest. I can't really tell though if that's a result of her lying down or not, so I guess it's passable.
The feet are, I'm sorry, very, very awkward. I actually used to draw high heels the same way. But you have to keep practicing until you get it right. Try and use a reference for high heels next time, trust me, it helps!
The part where her underwear is going between her legs is too even. Look at underwear or bikinis. They go thin near the middle, and get wider towards the butt.
In terms of shading, use WAY darker colours. It's barely noticable. Darker shades really help it stand out more.
For the hair, try to think of it realistically. Take it as strands coming from 1 central direction. Study hair in real life, it's always the best way to see the form of the hair. I'm always told hair is probably what's best about my work, so hopefully my advice will help you out.
Anyway, sorry for the TL;DR critique. Hopefully though my advice will be helpful to you in someway.
Good luck!
DragonPunch responds:
Yeah, I see what you're saying...I'll do better next time. BUT, this is my character. I came up with this character, and she is mine. No one's work was stolen, or anything. I need to stress a point too: ALL OF MY WORK IS ORIGINAL! I THOUGHT OF IT, I CREATED IT, THEREFORE, IT IS MINE. NEVER WILL I EVER STEAL ANYONE ELSE'S WORK AND CLAIM IT AS MY OWN. I will not do that. Plagiarism is completely against my policy, always has been, always will.
great
cute and hot :3 thats what i like :3
DragonPunch responds:
Thank you so very much! Wanna be friends?