On every degree.
Every time I listen to your abstract hip hop pieces, I am very inspired to write.
This type of hip hop is the type that almost tells a story in your mind while you listen. The name somehow has alot of meaning in my eyes because whenever I hear it, I get the same feeling as I get whenever I hear sirens. Almost like someone is dying, or passing? Maybe a problem of some sort.
This music, is not the bling hip hop. I would put it in a new style of Hip Hop. You have your own musical style. A very unique one too. And the times I hear your music, I normally get devoured by its taste, and listen to it, until I understand it, and I almost know the song. This shall be another to go on my Zune.
Pro's:
This song is very in-depth.
A vibe is given off in this that is dark, and struggling.
The song is overall a great song to listen to during a rainy day, problem, etc.
Con's:
(I mentioned the strings being lo-fi. Which you fixed :D)
The song needs a little variation, just so it doesnt seem so... Repetitive.
But most importantly, this belongs on a CD. Something people will buy.
Something that can be distributed to the masses, instead of to people like me, who dont deserve this free. Your talent as a musician exceeds those who sell their music now.
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Keep it up Yun. Your music is great.
Always.
-Phade
New Era