I like this track. Its a good collection of ideas, However, I struggled to place it into one genre. By the end of the song, I decided it was mostly melodic death metal. The problem I have with this song is that I can't really hear where its going. Its sounds more like a collection of really good riffs. There needs to be more of a hook. Maybe reorganising the structure, adding something, removing something, developing something or maybe concentrating on a certain riff and making that the main theme. As I say, I like the idea, but I wouldn't play this live with your band. You can record it if you want. I have no business in that, but it just doesn't feel right and ready for massive exposure. Good work.