Yay! But, um...
The beginning part is actually more EPIC than the previous version!
You added slow but very strong string(i guess) notes <E] <E] <C] <B] which creates a very strong Rage feeling! :D
But, um, after 1min, i cannot feel the mood. >:/ Maybe it should be more quiet and depressed and "deadly"? and later more cruel and tragic? I think it loses the dramatic vibes which, kind of brings the mood down.
Well, i always respect you and admire your work, but be honest this can still improve a lot... x_X But still, good job! :D