Sounds about right
I like the mood in this piece - it has a sort of nostalgic feel, a desire for slower and simpler times. That said, I think the celesta or whatever bell like instrument needs to be changed - it's a bit too bright and ringy for the mood of the piece, and just a bit grating on the ears. You can probably even do without it altogether and still have a solid piece.
Good job on this though.
In retrospect, the bell section is superfluous at best, altogether detrimental to the piece at worst, so it's out. You have quite the ear-- those are precisely the feelings I was going for, the ones which wash over me so often. A tad dramatic, but any other phrasing would not quite cut it. Whatever it is.
Anyway, thanks for the critique, and your sympathy. I'm changing it up in a bit so I can finally be pleased with it.
Music is the hearts medication!
really this isn't ab ad track at all it just needs a little help here and there.. Some of the notes seemed sour but other then that it was pretty good.. Itsa beautiful song. Keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
The dissonances are a tad irksome, yes. This is just a rough cut-- I quite literally made this in 5 minutes. I'll resubmit it in an hour or two. I think the dissonance stems from the bell section which, at shizeet's suggestion and my preference, shall be removed outright.
Also, I'm turning the volume up. As a side note.
Thanks for the critique, the kind words, and your ears.