Neo-Classical Seal of Disapproval
Interesting stuff, sort of has the flavor of that Rejected cartoon. The graphics are pretty well done, but the sound is atrocious. Fortunately, I used a pen to puncture my ear drums right around when that second guy showed up, and that saved me a lot of trouble. Anyway, I think the story is a fun one, but you need to plot it better. Consider the ideals of Aristotle!