Impressive start man.
This sounds great. I'm surprised this was your first try, well success, at making breakcore music. Not bad for my taste, had good beats in there, but just that background synth was repeating throughout the entire breakbeat. It would add more flavour to the song if you changed it, but again, this a an attempt, a test.
I'll let it go just cause I like encouraging new artists with lots of potential to show off. I say you should go and make an actual song with your skill, and see how it all goes from there. PM me when you do. I'm gonna check your other song after I finsih with this review. So good job on this, I'm sure you'll do great later on! 9/10 :)