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Reviews for "Mechanical Hazard"

Holy shit...

I created an account here just so I could comment on how fucking epic this is. Seriously, for some reason, this just calls to me, and I want more of it. Absolutely fantastic. This deserves to be in the number one spot by way of epicness.

Nice!

Very nice! I still can't believe this is your first song! I did promise i would write a helpful review so here goes.

Tips:
1. Beat - Should maybe be a little louder so it doesn't get lost behind the guitars. This would give it a more complete feel.
2. Guitars - Maybe add some reveerb. (You may not know how to do that but i can teach you over msn)

Things to add: (These are tottaly up to you)
1. Bass guitar - This would add a nice effect
2. Extra instrument - Examples: Orchestra strings, high techno noise, pad.

I hope that helps!!!

9/10
5/5

Wow.

Especially for your first song, this was great.
I really loved it, without the effects, it would've been shit, I must tell you that. Repetitive is a good thing here, so if you do better and keep working at it you'll be on the top 30 in no time ~^^~
Good luck :3

AWESOME!

First try huh? sounds like you have been doing this for years.

good but .....

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basically the same notes