Quarl rawr!
It's all right, but it felt really empty at times (primarily the intro.) I'd recommend adding some background pads to add the atmosphere. Also, the instruments didn't sound really too good until the chorus came around.
The track itself is all right, but there's a lot of work to be had to this. I doubt my review could be helpful at all, but I really have to get going right now and I don't have the time to leave an adequate review. Sorry man. Hope the next review is use full :P
Robin7 