Pretty cool but..
... but you should try to do the action go slowly. First, this would add more suspence in the movie and second, this would make your movie longer :)
Radagast
Reviews for "Ruby"
zotan9 responds:
Thanks! You have no idea how excited I am for getting,... well, much better reviews than I used to get. I didn't spend a whole lot of time making this episode, but now that I know it may have potential, I will work harder on it. Thanks for the criticism!
Its good for a "stick" movie person
FIrst of all I guess I should despise you for making a stick movie but I can see you put realy effort into this, The animation was of an acceptible standard and your developing a plot now matter how cliched it was rather succsesfully. I still prefer the traumaville moves to this as thier soooooo cool.....mmmm large breasts.mmmmmm.......but with a little work on more ambiounce and this will go far
Good First Try
Overall, I think the strongest part of this movie is it's solid plot. This seems like the perfect set up that would start an excellent new series.
Just some comments:
I think your graphics were just OK. Antimation was just OK. I'm not a big fan of sound bubbles (they seem a bit obtrusive).
Of course, there was no interactivity or humor, but such as the case with movies like these.
Sound was just OK. Nothing great... you could use a bit of ambience.
I think your strong point is style (story).
zotan9 responds:
Thank you so much for the positive review. I will indeed try harder. I've been having a rough time, especially with my gigantic flop, "Sticky", which has recently been taken off the site for getting a low score of .86... oh well, I'm new at this.
Nice...
I should give a 7 however I think you have potential and I could forsee it be a fairly nice series. Ryan