really nice. download'd
I really like the 8-bit breakdown. I don't like the lead synth round 2:35
Reviews for "These mistakes 2"
nubbinownz responds:
ahh yeah man i totally understand what you're saying!
needs a lil work but
it really does have a cool sound to it. I think it just needs a little more mastering done to it. Other then that its a pretty damn good track man! For having all it has in it its still lovely to listen to. Great work on the piano!
Wyldfyre1
nubbinownz responds:
thank you ! :D Yes, the mastering on my older tracks is pretty darned shoddy. I really ought to come back and redo these. But I don't have all the original samples and instruments. :(
Good
Few kinks here and there, but overall its good.
nubbinownz responds:
thank you :D
I think I know what it is...
In some places, you believe it's going to go one way, yet then it goes an entirely different direction - almost like it's starting over with the story. It's too busy for too long in some areas, and this almost feels forced, unlike your first piece. It also had that lyric thing in it in the first one - something that appeared to give the song meaning. This seems like a forced story that was made up as it went along, without much planning. The first one just seemed to flow. This is good nonetheless, but still... v.v I think this still has potential left in it. ;P
nubbinownz responds:
hehe thank you very much, I think that makes sense. These mistakes was one of my very first songs, and had ALOT of emotion attached to it. This one here was more of a revision of that song.
thank you for the great review man :D
Nice work
I like it... alot..! (:. The first one was better though. I don't really know what made the first one better though (sry ^^)...
nubbinownz responds:
hehe most people aren't able to tell me what causes them to like the first more. But I still appreciate the feedback either way :)