great!
sounds really good...
I like the soft & kind of sweet rhythm...
& you sing very well... was nice
the lyrics were great & I like the piano a lot
is a nice work...
continue that way
Reviews for "~Fall~ by Caleb"
Cayler responds:
Thank you so much. I like the general sound of this song, but I hope to advance upon it soon though and make it better where it faults. thanks for the 10 :)
im getting down to this
Really liking the lyrics, theyre pretty deep. After the lyrics dropped off right before the strings came in the piano should carry more of a melody and not just chords. I think it would make the transition smoother. At two minutes is what i was sort of talking about . The song has so many different movements. Really liking the last section with the bells. The synth was sort of a strange choice though.
Props man. Putting it all out there
Cayler responds:
Thanks for the constructive criticism, it's most helpful because I plan on redoing alot on all of my music so I'll consider your words when I am. Actually, of all the things I've already been planning on changing about it, what you stated hadn't caught my attention so thanks for bringing it out into the light. The closest thing that's already in it to a melody during that part is a cello that climbs up the scale one step every half a measure and I think it would help if I brought that out alot more by making it louder and maybe adding other sounds making the melody. (*There was one melodic part that I just forgot to add when I was mixing it down, and it's a soft churchy organ that plays during the main chord progressions, the melody is what the piano is playing at the very end of that strings only segment*) Again, thanks for the real review ^_^