Story could use some work.
I like what you've started here, but it feels like you're falling a bit short on plot. The setting is nice, Link and Zelda living in some house (the maid part was a nice touch) but there wasn't enough explanation as to why he was taken in the first place. It all felt like a bunch of random events. That might have been a small whiplash of mixing things, though. Well, I think if you keep it up it could turn out pretty cool, I think it's got potential. Oh, and maybe squeeze a bit more character movement and surprises in there; just some suggestions. Good luck with whatever you decide to do.