Very Nice, I think your wife will love it
I remember bout a year ago, a dude wrote a song for his wife and it was freaking amazing, April 3rd 2008 I hear this and if you only see me right now, I'd be giving you a standing ovation. This is a great song, and I think because you did it for someone you love, you put the effort into it, and it shows. Congratulations buddy, you did a great job.
p.s- after making this, who knows you may get lucky ;) lol.