Butterscotch.
Not bad, I like the instruments you used, if it was a bit longer I think it would be great even though you believe otherwise.
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PERVOK responds:
It's not so much that it wouldn't sound good longer; I just didn't have any ideas to make it longer and more diverse. So it'd just be a constant repetition, and by that time the song would have lost it's steam and it wouldn't be that great.
Thanks for the review!