While i liked there relationship, I believe this is still good. And most importantly these are "your" characters you can do whatever you want with them if you want to try something different with them then you have every right to. And at the end of the day they may get back together stronger ibam excited to see what stories you tell with this
Reviews for "Break - Nessie and Alison"
i don't know how to feel about this. i'll wait for more, though.
I will wait for the next stories that may result of this.
By they way I love your work
get back together orgy when? lol
Honestly the way its set up, i felt this was gonna happen. But the way it's portrayed is kinda comical. I hear furious smartphone tapping and then "i need a break". I mean i wasnt hear from the start of it all, but i was able to catch up for the most part