Reviews for Japanese Wolf

[sixflab]

Review

-It's an interesting design having a said Japanese wolf considering that there aren't any wolves in Japan as to my knowledge. I could be wrong but it just takes away from things.

-The right front paw is just glaring at me right now. While all of the other three paws have some sort of shading that one doesn't have anything other than the fine outline and it makes it the odd one out. It makes it look really wierd and could of at least had a thicker paw outline.

-Other than that it looked fine to me though. The pen drawn wolf howling at the moon with japanese lettering on the side is great and maybe needed to be a little larger picture but it's fine the way it is size wise.

-Review Request Club

MonoFlauta responds:

Yes the most important problem is that i dont have scanner so i took a photo to upload it here

Thanks for reviewing

[Joshsouza]

Looks like Vector!

Well this is really good but did you use a fie point pen because that would have taken up a whole lot of ink there but back to subject, the edges look crisp and smooth like some vector art and I wouldn't be surprised if it was vector art. Anyways, the right paw looked different because it isn't all filled in like the rest of his body so try and fix that.

I am glad that you didn't add any color into it because that would ruin the whole "Japanese" effect on it all and it would just look ugly and such so good call on that.

I think you should keep up these kinds of drawings because you are good with the edges and all of that, but fix up that right paw a bit and it will be perfect. You have my word for it.

~Review Request Club~

-joshsouza

MonoFlauta responds:

ok, thanks a lot for the review :D

[Xyirx]

Beautiful edges.

The way you drew the jagged lines are very nice. I can see Japanese art quite obviously. However, I think that you could have finished his right paw with ink there. That is the only spot I find strange. Oh, and try using scanner instead of camera when you're posting art. It'd look more neat and flash won't come in to disturb your masterpiece.

MonoFlauta responds:

yes the problem is that i need to get an scanner :P thanks for the review!

[XwaynecoltX]

Needs brighter colors

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this one was the most oddest ones of the bunch, while it does remind me of a wolf and is the most clearest of all the other designs, its also seems to have abit lesser quality to it, it might be because the texture is not showing so well or theres less color to this, it might even be that the color is that of a darker one, something to think about, as the Brighter colors "RED" "BLUE" "GREENS" tend to comeout much better, the whole moon above is also kinda odd, and the "LETTERING" seems too think over the other designs, but anyways its not my faveourite by any means but i still like it, and as i have said in the others it has a pattern likeness and needs that extra push to give it its own "UNIQENESS" for this one i think it needs a brighter color, I would suggest using more then one color, like you could have the Wolf one color and the "MOON" another brighter color, it might show off better, and then as said before backrounds would be nice and give it that uniqueness i been talking about, so these are all things to think about when creating these and or new designs.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated, something with more of a personal touch on each one so they are not such the same, in this one some new colors for the wolf even a second color for the moon would sufice, the texture was just not showing up in this one.

~X~

MonoFlauta responds:

yes, the problem is the photo because i dont have scanner yet u.u but thanks for the review!