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Reviews for "Substance of the Unconscious"

WTF Teck071

Dude shut your mouth, you dont have the right to say this is not his track, when you say something like that you must say from who, when you say its not your track then shut it up, dont hear it or something like, NG dont need people like they think they can play god and say its not from him, its from me and download it first make some other beats and say its from not from. Also shout your mouth listen to the music and be happy that the song is on NG ^^

it b good

i like it, and it's perfect for this video i'm gonna make for school- it's intended to brainwash the entire student population. can i use it for that? i'll gives you credit of course.

UnordinaryDragon responds:

Yup

is nice

is good
the rhythm is ok...
nice beat
but... i could be better...
is kind of slow... or soft... you get bored easily...
maybe if it wasn't of 6 min...
so... keep trying...
you can do a good job

UnordinaryDragon responds:

Oh.... ok

I think more ambient than Trance.

I like it, just a few tips though.
You may want to find an alternative to the offbeat bass, and try to find a different bass pattern for each song, just so not to be repetitive.

IF you want the whole 'stick in your head trance, anthem' lead sound, try to use higher notes, E & F are the ones most people start with.

Try to have a structure like, Intro, Chorus, Outro. i couldn't tell where I was with this song.

Other than that I like.
Good one.

UnordinaryDragon responds:

E and F are the ones "most" people start with. I am not "most" people. I wasen't going for the stick in your head trance, anthem. Also structure is for people that don't know what the hell thier doing so the find a guideline becuase people tend to like more of the exact same thing.

Music Review #1015

Hmm... I like this... a slow build-up trance music... i like the sound effects from left to right... i guess that happens when yer listening with a headphone... still, this is pretty good stuff, maybe nexxt time, try making it bit of stylish, so its not that repeatitve... apology for not understanding what im saying, im nnot good at laying out sentences in english, sozz...