Thats a really......
Nice hooks, for me this seems a bit rushed... as in the BPM is a bit to high.... but i liked it.... i'd have slowed it down a bit.... done a mix with some strings... and added some non synth brass in the background... heavied it up a bit... funky house style....
But this fits the genre and sounds very good...
What did you make it in? i have some free time coming up to spend on little projects and i like the idea of doing a remix....