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Reviews for "Mz. Daiquiri"
hell ya!!!!!!
i'd give here any thing!!! nice drawing
i wish she was my teacher
fuck the guys dissing you there is nothing wrong with this
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Criticism.
Frankly the facial expression ruined the art for me. A wink and a smirk or maybe pursed lips could have given this drawing 20x more class and brought the point across better. If you want my two cents- instead of having her sitting on the floor cross legged with her garter hanging out, try a perspective of her standing bent forward, maybe show a little cleavage, and give her a wink. (be creative) allowing you to give her the sexy edge, but not making it look like she is an escort... as she is now, you could add a brick wall and a sidewalk to this drawing, and she would make a fine harlot. I think that this is one of your better works, it looks like a lot more work went into it, but make sure that it still carries your flair, because it does look a tad suspicious. Keep up the good work, I love finding new art on the portal, and this one was a good chance to offer my two cents.
i'd love to get some feedback from you with your thoughts.
-keep up the goodwork,
-BU
LovelyKouga responds:
But that's the thing, honey...my character is not like that. She's not confident in her sexuality to wink or smile seductively, she's more child-like in mindset.
This is only a sketch after all, I'll have to crank out other such drawings of her. :)
negative review
looks like you didn't draw this. Compared to your other work, this frankly looks like you paid someone else to draw this.
The subject matter in itself is uninspired and jaded. Obviously since none of your characters have any actual personality, you have to convey everything about the character in the imagery instead.
I mean, to give an example, this character has a frivolent facial expression, but you're making her out to be some sort of cocktease flirt.
If you change the face, the message can get across without needing to resort to basic imagery. You're basically throwing a sandwich board on them that reads "I HAVE THIS KIND OF PERSONALITY, DESPITE MY ACTUAL CHARACTERIZATION HAVING NOTHING TO DO WITH THIS."
Also I'd vote higher, but there's waaaaay too many "lol 10/10 5/5" retards voting on this to be stingy with voting power. They're throwing their max scores but if I were to minimize my score, my vote would count as lacking serious credit.
Fucking kids.
LovelyKouga responds:
Didn't...draw it? What the hell is that supposed to mean? It's obviously my work, silly boy, any of my fans could tell you that. It's a sketch with simple colour underneath, so the only difference from this and my usual work is it doesn't have clean lines.
And I don't have to pay someone to draw for me...as people pay ME to draw for THEM.
I beg to differ on personality, honey. It's what I'm all about as far as character creation goes. And you think since this is a drawing, not a movie, that it doesn't convey personality? Have you SEEN any other drawings of this character? Probably not.
The expression is the whole point. It shows she's sort of childish in her response and possibly acting shy because she's heard that's what boys like. She's a slave to the media. haha!
Your comment...is honestly one of the stupider ones I've ever read.