Use a mixer
The 0 from Video Game Fanatic was a little out of line, but he does have a point. You have some great sounds going in this song, there are some clashes in texture however. Using a mixer could solve alot of your problems, bring out a couple instruments and keep some of your instruments on lower volume. I felt that your music started going a bit out of it past 2 minutes. Using a mixer would really help, but great job! Your track sounds awesome especially the last minute.