ahhhh... reminds me of me mum.
jk, ok, serious review. Artwork good, Charecter story needs a little work. Ill start with the art.
Good 3D effect but you lose it around the upper legs, shade more on the left to fix it. I like the hair and the ocular lense but i like the way the straps press the hair in as well. perhaps something that you can replicate with the upper strap on her arm to add a little more feeling of it being strapped on and not velcoed? other than that, good good. Great even. Story time.
Good up to the part where her dad tries to kill her. Not the fact that im saying its wrong, its just that I assumed (and probably not the only one) that her dad would use the same knife to kill himself as he did when he tried to kill her, made me go back and re-read the part about her dad killing himself. Also, after that, says that when she could move again. Why wasnt she able to move? Was she sedated to keep her from exaserbating her injuries? Did emotional trauma build up enough to manifest itself in physical form? Perhaps would be better if she began studdying while still recovering from her injuries and in the process took longer to heal due to the fact that she couldnt just rest? Other than thouse two things, pretty good char back story. Good trauma builds charecter and leads to either being a hero determined never to let it happen to anyone else, or a villan who was scarred and never recovered. Symbolism time.
Not bad, but i dont really think that the whole, lack of bathing and coat is symbolism, rather charecter choice.
Anyway, your total star rating is based off of the charecter as a whole. Below i will rate each section individualy
Art - 9.5
Backstory - 8
Symbolism - 6