Ayyy it's pretty lit! Especially 40 sec part.
Feedback(i guess..): some note sounds off scale. Sometimes it can spice up your music, but most of the time it makes the music a bit awkward. You use them quite often in your tracks. Although it might be intended, I suggest reducing them a bit. It'll make your track a little bit 'focused'.
Speaking of focus, while the track was pretty fun to listen to, it kinda lacks main theme; that is, the whole track sounds like an infinitely long buildup. Dunno what to do with it... maybe try to stick with some "core" melody instead of thinking new melodies for each bar. In other words, try being a bit repetitive(in a good way of course! lol). Being (appropriately) repetitve helps people to remember your song easily.
Reviews for "entraved disarray of instintation"
Super-shape responds:
thanks for the review! this track was kind of rushed, but i understand most of the problems listed here. the reason why it seems like a long buildup is because it's based off of a chord progression that i made a while back, and i didnt really know of much to do with it but i thought it sounded good enough to use in a song. the entire track was made in around the span of 5 hours, so i didnt really put that much effort into the structuring of it, as evidenced by the random shifts in melody and semi-abrupt end section. i had a decent amount of fun making this, even though i wouldnt really consider it my best track. i'll try to make some effort to improve on some of the things you mentioned in the future, but i can't guarantee for sure.